Questions of the Innocent

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Questions of the Innocent

Postby Hitokiri » Wed Jun 09, 2004 4:51 pm

heres a nice poetic song I made



Questions of the Innocent

Will we make it out alive?
When this world turns inside out
and everyone dies.
Trying to fly away to the sun.
But the sun seems to fall from the sky
Only to crash to the ground
And I feel the wind on my cheek.

If we make it out alive
Will you still love me like you did before?
Or will you hate me cause of my sin?Will I be promised grace
Or am I just a fallen angel.

CHORUS
He is the pain that is dwelling deep inside of me. (Falling away from him is the only remedy from pain.)
He pulls me down so much I scream for help (Only to cry for You)
You guide me through (this misery and pain)
Kneeling down on my knees (Grab my hand and pull me out please)

I watch the earth collide with the moon
I am sure this is the end of life
Choking back by the tears that
crash upon the ground
Forming lakes and rivers.
Let this fly off together
Hand in hand, laughing all the way

Are you the forgiver you say you are?
Or are we just a hopeless mess?
Comfortable in your warm embrace
Will you love me
Or am I just falling?

CHORUS

Tender kisses on my cheek
Soft words spoken in my ear
Beautiful eyes staring into mine
Grasp my hands as our worlds depart
And the void separates out love
Until I die and enter into you

Watching you leave as the ship goes down
standing alone, the stars grow over head
And the world crumples apart
and I awake
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